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March 11, 2005
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What is it like to bind your limbs in lace?
To control your very being?
My own little doll of ceramic beauty.
Your are more than my pretty face.
Lace is what holds you to me.
Wrapped around my fingers you dance upon my desk.
I control your every movement and yet me you don't resent.
You come when I call you because i move you my self.
I broke your spirit long ago and you love me for it.
Until I find another doll to brake you are mines forever.
Defiantless yet full of vigor inspired by my finger.
I move you to and fro and for now you will go.
The shattered ceramic of the others lie mangled at your feet.
Brake our binding bond of lace and rest forever in pieces.
Oh yes, like the mangled nothings at your feet.
:icondarckazuee:
a like this one. All I can really say is this that my poem is what I feel many men want in a women.
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:iconetherealbeing:
um....pardon my boldness of opinion. romantic? that was one of the most unromantic poems i've ever read. romance being a dream? impossible? to be a true romantic is to be a dreamer of impossibilities...sure-if you're not a romantic at all. what your poem described was not love. it was controlling, cold, fake...love is none of those things. it seemed more like a cool sexual fantasy. not impossible to have...just find a sex slave to your dominating core. there are willing folk out there, you know. nice writing.
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:iconteenagekiss:
I really enjoyed this though some parts I was confused because of grammatical errors, but writers should not care of those kind of errors; they can always be fixed. But I thought this was a great poem. Really good work keep it up.
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:iconmunirah7:
it's.. *sighs*
brutally true. yet romantic.
you've woven contradiction into a thing of beauty.
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:icondarckazuee:
~Darckazuee Mar 11, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
A true romantic is not a romantic but a dreamer of impossibilities. It is romantic yes but it is an impossiblity. A mere dream of an aspect I believed was true. Such is why I am a romantic. Brutallity is mans common answer to the inevitability of things, that is why the primality of man factors in so much here. Man is brutal, such love is impossible and yet I write on. Although this sort of love is not a possibility the impossible is almost always inevitable. Thank you fellow romantic for understanding.
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