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Trust, the rope that bound my heart to yours
Sweet and innocent like children holding hands
Though the rain falls and violently pours
Bound we hold on with future plans

Through much and more the rope held tight
But slowly the rope  began to fray
It chokes me gently when I'm alone at night
Choking me more as you slip away

No longer children you let go of my hand
The rope fraying further with your aid
Little by little from my hand like sand
Our trust torn and dangerously frayed

One day you will leave me and fall away
I had tricked my self, this rope a ruse
This rope you frayed and left me with
Now my death a tattered noose
:icondarckazuee:
trust... a noose...
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~sammypajammy21 Mar 24, 2009   Traditional Artist
i love this sooo much! you are so amazing with word... sad cause i feel that way, it hasnt got to the end of the poem.... still awesome beautiful words!
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~Darckazuee Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
well, thank you but my words are only meaningful to those who can relate. I actually hope sometimes that readers wouldn't be able to understand my sad poems, just my happier ones
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~sammypajammy21 Apr 15, 2009   Traditional Artist
yes it would be nice.
but i think all your work is beautiful!
even though some are sad the way you make the words flow make it beautiful. sad things can be beautiful too
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:icondarness246:
... *Feels bad suddenly*
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:iconpoggyy:
i really like this poem, its got lovely description and wording. It makes me feel sad =O.
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