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February 26, 2011
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All glory to the living green
Alive and vibrant with what can't be seen
All glory to the ancient gods
Of wood and harrow earth and sod

Of which the wind through leaves doth play
Silently worshipping, the plants doth sway
All glory to the elder wood
Of which so few hath understood

Oh timeless green of ancients past
Of life slow lived but gone too fast
What soft green fingers toward the sky hath
Reached eternally for what can't be grasped

Forever live, forever grow
All glory to the seeds we sow
Until the day it all must end
As worshippers bow must all green bend
:icondarckazuee:
All glory to the things that grow..
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~fallencity Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Great poem! I like the flow and the feel.

Just one note: "doth" is the old version of "does", so you should have it as "wind... doth play" but "plants do sway"
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~Darckazuee Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the clarification :D I wasn't sure and I didn't bother editing :P
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